From 469c386338e4cab572a1a1e28ce0aeab12d1bfb6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthias Clasen <mclasen@redhat.com>
Date: Sat, 30 Mar 2013 01:11:30 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] docs: Improve the 'Connect time' section

Turn the bullet-point list into complete sentences.
---
 doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml | 19 ++++---------------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
index cab68a89..955b0540 100644
--- a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
+++ b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
-	    The first word is the sender's object id (32-bit).
+	    The first word is the sender's object ID (32-bit).
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
@@ -167,20 +167,9 @@
   <section id="sect-Protocol-Connect-Time">
     <title>Connect Time</title>
     <para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    no fixed format connect block, the server emits a bunch of
-	    events at connect time
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    presence events for global objects: output, compositor, input
-	    devices
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+      There is no fixed connection setup information, the server emits
+      multiple events at connect time, to indicate the presence and
+      properties of global objects: outputs, compositor, input devices.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sect-Protocol-Security-and-Authentication">