From 467d95ab73000367ee1c2c18bbdd13fe0165aeab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Bryce W. Harrington" Date: Fri, 9 Aug 2013 01:47:04 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] publican: Cleanup Preface's grammar. Signed-off-by: Bryce Harrington --- doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml | 13 ++++++------- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml b/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml index eeb16cc1..e6875a34 100644 --- a/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml +++ b/doc/publican/sources/Foreword.xml @@ -9,15 +9,14 @@ Preface - This document concerns the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of - operation and (iii) its library API. Wayland protocol specification is shown - also in the Appendix. The document here is aimed at Wayland developers and - who is looking for information how to program with it, but it is not meant - primarily for applications developers. + This document describes the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of + operation and (iii) its library API. Also, the Wayland protocol specification is shown + in the Appendix. This document is aimed primarily at Wayland developers and + those looking to program with it; it does not cover application development. - There have been many contributors to this document and, while this is the - first edition only, many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate + There have been many contributors to this document and since this is only the + first edition many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate corrections.